1/26/2009

WA4- 2nd draft

Dear President Obama,

For the next four years you have a large responsibility, but i am confident that you will do an excellent job. Although many problems cannot be fixed within the four shorts years of a presidential term, I hope that you focus especially on the econmy of our nation and global enviromental issues.

The economy collaspe earlier in 2008 has brought about many difficulties on American citizens. Month to month, the numbers of unemplyment grow, increasing debt and homelessness. This is a concern. Eventually, only the privilaged will able to lead comfortable, structures lives. We strive for "all men are created" equal, and i hope that you see that we need to get a start on the problems at home before we turn to our foreign responsibilities.

Secondly, we as Americans are one of the ost wasteful nations in the world. Soon all promblems will revolve around how the world is slowly dying, and we have the power to slow, possibly stop and reverse this process. Together, citizens need to work together to try to reduce emissions and be more resourceful, while at the same time not making it a huge part of life. With a little effort from everyone we can reduce our waste and emissions just by doing the little things. Reduce, re-use, recycle.

I hope that you take these things into conseration, as we as a nation have the power to come together, change, and be better. Thank you.

SIncerely,
Suzanne Galbraith

1 comment:

Ms. Wiesner said...

(I) NOT (i)

Awkward: "I hope that you focus especially on the (economy) of our nation and global (environmental) issues"

Check this whole thing for spelling. Copy it into Word and spell check it.

ost = most